Dr. Tick Tock

[quote="Dreamer"][quote="Rosey Unicorn"]I clicked on the "Global Moderators" list and it only gave one actual mod (Snoink) on the list. The rest were... interesting.[/quote] Nate, do not fix that. :P[

Hello Taytay! First off, just want to say that I think the general idea of this is pretty cool and unique. I have always been a big fan of faeries, ...

It's so cool! I love it. Still exploring and everything, but so far I've only got one complaint, which I think was mentioned before. In some of the literary forums, ...

Wow! Thank you so much for the critique! ... Are we allowed to respond back to them? Oh, well... I changed "the sweating flesh of the sellers behind their booths" ...

Chapter One He could almost taste the air, thick with the festival’s smells; cooking meat and the spicy seasoning his region was known for, mingled with roasting vegetables, fresh bread, ...

I really like it! One critique for you: The cars rush by The other children fly To each open car door. Maybe say "To each open their car door."? "Open ...

The Plague I am going to talk about the worst conflict that the world has ever seen. Now, this conflict is a plague. There isn’t really a name for this ...

An... awkward poem. It is symbolizing mankind, and the chaos we wreck. And when someone tries to stand against that chaos, they are eventually pressured and pushed into simply believing ...

I edited and posted Chapter One again for you guys, if you want to bother rereading it. I spent most of the morning reading, rereading, and editing minuscule problems. Feel ...

To be a writer you have to take criticism patiently and politely, Bookmarker. Critiquing isn't always going to be compliments. And mikedb1492 is a reader, giving you tips and opinions ...

Good concept; I like it. However you seem to have some controversial issues with grammar. You have good punctuation and capitalization and then just the opposite... sometimes in the same ...

Hello, my name is Isabella, and my husband is Isaic. We live in Idaho, where we sell igloos.

"In The Forests of the Night" and others by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. Quick readings, too.

Doctor doesn't look much like a doctor... nor act like one. Oh dear. She also has a mass of hair that hates her. I have a long tongue. "Hello, yes? ...

Thank you, Pork! That's actually the first official critique I've ever gotten. It really opens your eyes, doesn't it? I'll fix all those errors you pointed out. ... too late ...